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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-07-20 08:36 AM




Steam heat hits you like a wall
when you walk out the door
Radiant green grass generates
thick unbreatheable air
under the Bunsen burner sun
Brilliant blue skies vacuum
up heaping cotton ball clouds
Dead calm runs in riverlets
of wasted stinging sweat
Shade of trees offers mirage
of coolness for temptation
Continuous thirst for relief
presses cold glass to forehead


LGR(C)7/20/13


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-07-20 08:40 AM


Oh boy! Did you ever call it with this poem, Lori. From the steam heat to the Bunsen burner sun to the wasted stinging sweat. Summertime! Bring back cool weather, I wasn't one who was wishing for this. I also relate to the cold glass to forehead.

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (07-20-2013 10:58 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2013-07-20 09:51 AM


Here in Kansas we get hot and dry and the humid too. When we get rain it is like a sauna and when there is no rain it is like a confection oven. I'm happy you liked my poem.  


Lori

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2013-07-20 10:16 AM


captures the (global warming) reality perfectly!
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2013-07-21 09:04 AM


Speaking of global warming Jimmy, this has been the oddest year for weather here. We have had quite a bit of rain in July and several below normal temperatures and it looks and feels more like June and I think we had frosts up to the end of April (maybe in to May) that may not sound like "warming" but I know it is connected to a change in world wide weather patterns.It didn't get very cold this winter so this has been an awful year for fleas and ticks and other creepie crawlies that mostly die off during the winter.

Lori

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