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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-07-10 09:30 AM

If wishes were dust,
I'd have a house full.
Oh wait, I already do.

If wishes were dishes,
I'd have sinks full.
Oh wait, I already do.

If wishes were laundry,
I'd have baskets full.
Oh wait, I already do.

If wishes were stars,
I'd have a sky full.
Oh wait, I already do.

If wishes were you,
I'd have a heart full.
Oh wait, I already do.

LGR(C)7/10/13

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-07-10 09:52 AM

Ahhh, such a simple, sweet poem, and I know the one it is intended to swells with happiness when he reads the words. Unique. Very Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-07-10 09:56 AM

"Very Lori". Thanks Jerry, I like the sound of that.

Lori

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2013-07-11 11:12 AM

Absolutely delightful, Lori!

Owl

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2013-07-11 02:52 PM

Thank you so much Owl! Nice to know you enjoyed it.

Lori

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

5 posted 2013-07-12 08:59 AM

so sweet, love at its lovliest, may you always be so Blessed with it

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2013-07-12 09:04 AM

Thank you EmmaRose, that is very sweet of you to say.

Lori

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2013-07-15 01:49 PM

Lovely poem, Lori.
Ida

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2013-07-15 08:00 PM

Thanks Ida, glad you liked it!

Lori

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

9 posted 2013-07-20 04:27 PM

That is the sweetest thing I have read in ages! Glad I stopped by to read!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

10 posted 2013-07-21 08:53 AM

Well thank you very much! I'm doubly glad you stopped by. I appreciate you taking the time to let me know.

Lori

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