Open Poetry #48 |
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Dancing with the Pen |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia ![]() |
My pen again has found its way Befriending words to come and play Enticing me to dance with pen And start to write of life again Amazing from where words they come To form a thought to share with some The wanting need that time does grow Becomes the tool that makes them flow It’s then we find an inner peace In sharing what we need release Writing what the soul does share Without a fear and without care A gift to hear the voice within With love it lets the pen begin It’s wise with many souls as friend A blessing that the Lord did send ----------------------- I thank you very much dear time For sharing moments here to rhyme And thankyou voices in my head That fill the pen and verses wed |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes indeed, the words inside us expect and yea, demand that they are shared with the world. Thank goodness for the Internet, we can implode our words. Your words are good ones, Rick. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
very perceptive of that nudge inside that cajoles us, whether or not we even realizes its presence at times, we are thankful it exists |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Rick, I think this is exactly what writing is all about "It’s then we find an inner peace In sharing what we need release Writing what the soul does share Without a fear and without care" Great portrait! Lori ![]() |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I see this as an awesome tribute to the muses. Life for a poet is utter emptiness without them. Glad you have yours again. ![]() Michael |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I love your poem and have to say that it is one of the most beautiful poems I have read in a long time right down to the last verse...i did giggle a lil tho ![]() ![]() ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Good to see you again, my friend. And good to read you words too. Enjoyed, jimmy |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
To you all my friends, thank you very much for all the replies, it's lovely to be back among you all, I hope to share many more poems so to be treated by all your smiling words again, take care and enjoy the moments. Rick |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Enjoyed your poem ) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Rick, your cadence and rhyme are flowing as beautifully as I remember from before. Lovely to read you again. Much enjoyed this. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Gale, great to see your reply again, thank you. Dear Kit, lovely to see you again here my friend, I do hope to write more and more, often finding the time is the problem and when finding the time finding the muse to assist, I hope you have been well and still writing yourself. Again thank you both for stopping by. Sincerely Rick |
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