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JamesJBowie New Member
since 2013-07-09
Posts 5 |
at the gas station the old man has an easy face only lines from smiles content in his labors some look down at the man pumping gas but if you raise your head from your stressed stance you may finally see him many years ago as a practiced doctor he delivered you still knows your screaming face changed though it has as he wipes dripped gas with a greasy rag you cannot imagine the magic they once contained as you pay him he gives you a warm smile but you do not notice because he is just a simple gas pumper |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very impressive, I think. You succeeded in making one wonder why this change has occurred. But in the old man's eyes his life seems to radiate confidence still. Like this. Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice little mystery here, James. Enjoyed. Ida |
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