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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-07-21 07:08 AM



was it fate
or mere curiosity
that brought us together
two struggling people
found each other
with a twist of destiny
a casual encounter
we will never fail to remember
that we connected
so quickly and so completely
was our fate
I will forever believe
we intersected
and I found providence
in your hazel eyes
time and again
I felt our love  was lost
in the complicated web we wove
still . . .
across the breadth
of our longing
we met and conquered each others needs
would that you
could put your past in shredder
I have mine
still I believe nothing can destroy
our love
a love which is so interwoven
bring on the moon
let it shut out the sun's brightness
the dark will not continue
the brightness of your Goddess
brings the light flowing down on me
our bond is eternal
it's as though you're here with me now
ready and willing
to untangle the mystery of us

©May 19, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2013 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2013-07-21 07:34 AM


quote:
the brightness of your Goddess
brings the light flowing down on me


So very beautiful, Jerry. The heart overflows with joy for this love and can't but share it with the world.

Synchronicity is a constant in our lives, but sometimes we fail to notice. You wish for something (or somebody) and it (or she/he) materializes in the most amazing ways.

Universe conjures to help us realize our innermost desires. Call it fate, destiny or chance ... The weavers are busy somewhere ....

Margherita

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-07-21 07:53 AM


Ah, Margherita, you do know how to put things in perspective, and I am always happy to see you here in my little blue room corner.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2013-07-21 08:45 AM


This is delightful Jerry!

  it's as though you're here with me now
  ready and willing
  to untangle the mystery of us

I think this line is way cool. Like I always say friend, love looks good on you!

Lori  

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
4 posted 2013-07-21 08:51 AM


Many thanks, Lori, you always make me smile when I see your name here in the Blue Room.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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