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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-07-07 07:29 AM

There's a song inside me for you alone,
It's mellow and carefree and just for you,
I give you the words in form of poems,
Now you have a part of me that is true.

In the morning I awake; you are there,
In my thoughts I see your kissable lips,
It's as though we've spent the night together,
Too soon I discover it's a mind trip.

Â©June 23, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

1 posted 2013-07-07 07:45 AM

It's great, Jerry!
And maybe sad.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2013-07-07 09:04 AM

At least you still have you mind my friend, you still have have that.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-07-07 09:07 AM

Thanks Gale, and yes, it is a bit of sad.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-07-07 09:08 AM

I do still have that, Lori, and that is a good thing.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2013-07-08 07:45 PM

I don't think there's anyone alive that hasn't felt that way one time or another.
You've captured the idea very well in this short piece, it's a great read!

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-07-08 07:48 PM

I agree, Eric, and thank you for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

7 posted 2013-07-14 04:00 PM

This reads of a great inspiration

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2013-07-14 04:03 PM

I appreciate the kind thoughts, Emma.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2013-07-15 07:04 AM

quote:
There's a song inside me for you alone,

And as long as there is this song, it is not really sad, isn't it, Jerry.

There is great comfort in being able to feel close even at distance.

Beautiful.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2013-07-15 07:07 AM

Yes, I so agree with you, Margherita. One can carry love although there are great miles between them.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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