Open Poetry #48 |
My heaven |
Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
. It’s always my favourite paint The colour of sunny skies Awaking my dream, my faith The shine of your loving eyes It lit up my fading hopes It made me forget my fears Assured me that I will cope With anything that I face But if you give up my love If ever your eyes turn grey My blue in the sky above I know, it still remains It shelters me from the rain Consoling my rebel heart The one which can not betray And will never dare to hurt So, looking into the deep I fondly recall your name To whisper it in my sleep And, waking, repeat the same The only way is to trust If I can not feel a clue My heaven’s lost in the dust My soul is forever blue 06/07/2013 . |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice thoughts concerning your feeling about the environment, or at least the sky and feelings of someone dear. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
It's natural to me since he's really blue-eyed ) Thank you for reading, Jerry! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Sad, but beautiful, Galina. Owl |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Thank you, Diana ) I've found that sadness and joy are so tangled in our languages ) As I know, "blue" means not only a colour in English, but also it means "sad". But in Russian "blue"/"ãîëóáîé" (apart from the literal sense) means the same as that you use to call "gay". But your "gay" literally is "merry". So strange association ) |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A beautiful post Gale, of loving thoughts and ever hope, well expressed Rick |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Thank you, Rick! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Sad, but sweet. Juju -Juju |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful attempt to cling to your very own blue heaven. I enjoyed this much, sweetly melancholic. Margherita |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Thank you for reading, Juju! |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Thank you, Margherita! It's true, that sometimes you have nothing more to cling to. "... and then do not let thee part from your blue heaven in that realm of shadows..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
It had a wonderful wistful quality to it. Enjoyed Lori |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
James, Lori, thank you both for reading and replying! |
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