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Gale
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0 posted 2013-07-06 04:08 PM


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It’s always my favourite paint
The colour of sunny skies
Awaking my dream, my faith
The shine of your loving eyes

It lit up my fading hopes
It made me forget my fears
Assured me that I will cope
With anything that I face

But if you give up my love
If ever your eyes turn grey
My blue in the sky above
I know, it still remains

It shelters me from the rain
Consoling my rebel heart
The one which can not betray
And will never dare to hurt

So, looking into the deep
I fondly recall your name
To whisper it in my sleep
And, waking, repeat the same

The only way is to trust
If I can not feel a clue
My heaven’s lost in the dust
My soul is forever blue


06/07/2013

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-07-06 04:35 PM


Nice thoughts concerning your feeling about the environment, or at least the sky and feelings of someone dear.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Gale
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2 posted 2013-07-06 05:38 PM


It's natural to me since he's really blue-eyed )
Thank you for reading, Jerry!

OwlSA
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3 posted 2013-07-07 02:09 AM


Sad, but beautiful, Galina.

Owl

Gale
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4 posted 2013-07-07 05:15 AM


Thank you, Diana )
I've found that sadness and joy are so tangled in our languages )
As I know, "blue" means not only a colour in English, but also it means "sad".
But in Russian "blue"/"ãîëóáîé" (apart from the literal sense) means the same as that you use to call "gay".
But your "gay" literally is "merry".
So strange association )

Rick
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5 posted 2013-07-07 07:21 AM


A beautiful post Gale, of loving thoughts and ever hope, well expressed

Rick

Gale
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6 posted 2013-07-07 07:39 AM


Thank you, Rick!
Juju
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7 posted 2013-07-08 09:57 AM


Sad, but sweet.


Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Margherita
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8 posted 2013-07-08 11:55 AM


Beautiful attempt to cling to your very own blue heaven.

I enjoyed this much, sweetly melancholic.

Margherita

Gale
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9 posted 2013-07-09 05:02 AM


Thank you for reading, Juju!

Gale
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10 posted 2013-07-09 05:29 AM


Thank you, Margherita!
It's true, that sometimes you have nothing more to cling to.

"... and then do not let thee
part from your blue heaven
in that realm of shadows..."

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2013-07-09 11:00 PM


enjoyed...James
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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12 posted 2013-07-11 03:50 PM


It had a wonderful wistful quality to it.
Enjoyed

Lori  

Gale
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13 posted 2013-07-15 07:26 AM


James, Lori, thank you both for reading and replying!
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