Open Poetry #48 |
Mind the gap |
Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Day by day I see you there, Where you let me, when you let, Buy your songs, plug up my ears With your voice I can’t forget, Learn your language, read your letters, Hear you saying “It’s alright”. Where you are, it doesn’t matter: Every day and every night I can touch you, I can feel you, I can tell you all I want. No more tears, no more fear… You are happy, are you not? Do you guess that I am crazy? Do you think that I am weak? - Have some faith! Don’t be so lazy! Stop to play your childish tricks! Wait a little, you are clever! This is it! Just one last step! Only stars laugh there in heaven: - Babe, babe, mind the gap! 2009 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
. . . and the gap gets bigger and wider and . . . bigger and . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
I'm not sure, Jerry ) It just exists. Thank you for reading ) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry. I get carried away with my comments sometime. Sorry. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Never mind, Jerry ) You're delicate, I know, you wouldn't mock at me. And you've said nothing terrible ) |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
"Only stars laugh there in heaven" Very touching. Thanks for sharing. |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
If only I knew then, that they will really laugh at me ) Thank you for reading! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Just one last step... God I've been there. A vivid expression of your feelings throughout. Nicely done. Michael |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed this, my friend ... and the comments said it all, I think...theirs and yours. jimmy |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Thank you, Michael! Thank you, Jimmy! |
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