Open Poetry #48 |
Miracle |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Make me a miracle, please, please, please so I can believe the now unseen that speaks of love in grandiose terms and makes me bow to the call. Make me a miracle so I can believe there’s merit in all suffering that twists this life into a knot and tightens it every day. Make me a miracle, please, please, please, so I can believe my perceptions are real and not from the depths of fantasy that holds delusion as paramount. Make me a miracle so I can believe each tear ever shed will be counted and credit given for heartache and grief forced into all human hearts. Make me a miracle, please, please, please, so I can believe, really believe, there’s a good and important reason why I did and do truly love you. Please make a miracle! Helen / 1 July 2013 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Aww Helen, the pain and suffering we "lovers" put ourselves through is boundless. After all these centuries you would think we would have gotten a handle on this love thing. What happens to us after the "I do's" is heartbreaking for the moat part. One or the other, maybe both, suddenly believe they are the lords and masters and throw out how we felt during our courtship days. It is truly sad, down to the bone sad. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Sometimes we need a miracle to believe, or at least an answer. I like your poem ) |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I hope you get that miracle, Helen. Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks, Jerry, Gale and Ida. I will get my miracle - may take more than my present lifetime though. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I've been told that when you expect a miracle, it will manifest. I wonder if we could actually put a date on it? Anyway, I enjoyed your heartfelt poem. Ms. E |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I do believe in miracles, also in the small everyday miracles that help us to believe in a Supreme Conductor. I love the outcry of your heart here, dear Helen, very intense. Margherita |
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