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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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the flame is more significant than the candle the poem is more important than the poet a deep kiss is more momentous than the lips my poems and letters and love for you are greater than the both of us for . . . they are the recorded record where the world will detect your desirability my insanity ©June 16, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (06-30-2013 08:05 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
insane? I think you are crazy like a fox. The first part of this poem is really exceptional. Like I have said before mjy friend love looks good on you.  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Always look forward to your comments, Lori, you just cut to the chase as it were. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I would say that love is a healthy kind of insanity, Jerry! Love this passionate poetic performance. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . I would wholeheartedly agree with you, Margherita, and thank you very much for being here. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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