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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Pale blue Cool breeze Across the street At dusk Leaves are dancing Robins fly Above the trees A single gull Wings its way Just out to see The passing wind Fans the strands Of her withered hair And something smiling In the willow stirs . |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
I like the imagery of this poem! Thank you for sharing it. I would like to write something similar, but I'm not enough poetical, although I love nature ) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love this fleeting moment, and I especially like your title and all that it evokes. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you both John . |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
There s something about this poem that feels so fresh to me. It's almost like stepping into the morning when the sun is just peering through the trees and the robins are singing. A |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I came back because this poem really hits me in a soft and gentle way. A |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Alison Thank you twice John . |
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