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Uncapturable
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Uncapturable |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest 
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Rain rides the blue highway its song, redundant, running on sentences strumming the cobblestones along with as the hills of the heavenly siphoning itself, it drowns in the graveyard undaunted by my longing to read between its droplets of proverbs and daffodils messages morph into shadow evading my fingertips like braille to hands that have calloused succumbing, undeciphered into the whirl of the waterfall's babble (and I never got to know you) [This message has been edited by EmmaRose (06-25-2013 09:30 AM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yow! Despite all your other masterpieces, this, in my opinion, is your pièce de résistance, EmmaRose! Whilst your title couldn't be better, and thus is perfect, it is simply untrue - you DID capture the uncapturable!!! More yow! Owl |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is really wonderful, Emma. You capture so much, and even more... in your short and endearing poem. Very nice writing~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
There are times when "succumb, undeciphered into the whirl of the waterfall's babble." is the right thing to do. However, when it comes to the heart there leaves much speculation. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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