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The Universe |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia 
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And this is my verse, not a translation. The Universe The universe seems to be A puzzle I must assemble A million pieces, disordered and crumbled And two of them – you and me The universe is my task A magic cube in my hands It’s strange, but to play the game to the end I have to destroy my past The universe is a sheet A perfectly empty space Imagine the future, imagine the place Somewhere we could ever meet Don’t care about my time Believe, I would spend it all To put it together, to reach for your soul To picture the world of mine 2008-2013 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This is beautiful. You have a definite voice and the voice is reaching to put the puzzle in place. Nice work. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Thank you, Jerry! You are my reader today  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Well said, Gale. Some puzzles will never be solved but we do owe it to ourselves to picture our world in a time that may or may not come about. And I wear the badge of your reader today. I'm sure others read though but perhaps don't comment for whatever reason.Helen |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Thank you, Helen, for reading and for your warm reply ) I wish everybody could solve his puzzles in time ) |
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