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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-06-19 09:13 AM



sparkling eyes, oh those sparkling eyes
they put me on a sixties high

your goddess face, your smile so warm
it chases away every storm

your celestial body so sweet
its all I need, oh such a treat

compelling attraction these day
you outshine the sun's intense rays

your gentle hands and scorching lips
yes indeed, you're fully equipped

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2013-06-19 01:08 PM


Doesn't sound like an old man winding down his last days wrote this my friend.


Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2013-06-19 01:09 PM


It isn't that old man, Lori. Thank you. Sometimes I just get into a funk, but then I remember what I have. It brightens my life.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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