Sound of a shattered heart

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Open Poetry #48

Sound of a shattered heart

chickoo007
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 70
India

0 posted 2013-06-10 02:30 PM

A heart breaks like shattered glass,
First a crack,then two,then three...
And then it breaks !
Do you hear THE SHATTER ?

You would , if you felt enough,
Enough , to just know how I felt,
You would , if you thought enough.
Enough , to just ask what I thought,
You would if you cared enough,
Enough , to know that I crave,
Endlessly for your love.
Endlessly for your care.

But you don't...
And thus my heart,
lies lonely...
Waiting,
Waiting for you to hear...
THE SOUND OF MY SHATTERED HEART....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2013-06-19 01:13 AM

fine writing of a failed love...James

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

2 posted 2013-06-19 10:06 AM

Expressive!
It reads like a song.

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