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Open Poetry #48
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2013-06-10 07:53 PM

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June without you
They have no answer
Summer cattails


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2013-06-13 01:20 PM

Kind of heartwrenching to me in this moment.

Beautiful in its melancholy.

Margherita
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
2 posted 2013-06-13 02:30 PM

I like this one alot. nice write.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
3 posted 2013-06-13 06:37 PM

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Thank you both


John


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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2013-06-20 10:42 PM

Enjoyed...James
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