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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-06-20 09:59 PM



Staring At the Moon


Wait has no due date
soon could mean any
April, May or June,
so there you are
waiting for soon
all by yourself
staring at
the moon...


JamesLee
19June
2013


    


    

    


    

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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2013-06-21 03:41 AM


I understand the painful thrust of the double-edged sword in this, James, in conjunction with another poem of yours.  Wishing you well.

Owl

Gale
Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
2 posted 2013-06-21 04:50 AM


James, it's very beautiful,
and very true!
Thank you for sharing!

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