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Open Poetry #48

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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-05-18 07:18 PM

She just passed her hands
through his eyes
as they began to undress one another
under a small summer field

Under the bridge of the branches trees
her shoulder blade, thin
like a waters small drip along his sweaty palm
she touched the leather end of his lips
his hands on top of her hair
his fingers running from the end of her scalp
up to her forehand
hair weaving in and out

Touching each others small lint clothing
forgiving, cotton, silk
unrelenting as his hands, her touch
grace fell between the side of the road
away from the street and the woods
became her shadows warmest lover

Each side
the angles of her feet
bending inward, clenching
his hands cradling her back
like the touch of a sounds whisper
along the mississippi bank river

Her naval began to shake
his body shifting
along the slight, tender slant of her neck
towards the pause of the grasses grace

As time shied away,
moans turned to sighs
his lips pursed around
the back of her neck
like the back channels
hugging the tight corners of the street side
accenting the nights echo
while their eyes
rye, subtle, closed
faced each other that warm summer night.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2013-05-18 10:11 PM

I loved these two lines in particular ...

---
along the slight, tender slant of her neck
towards the pause of the grasses grace
---

Alison

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2013-05-21 09:17 PM

A nice little frolic. Enjoyed!

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2013-05-30 05:49 PM

Allison-

Happy you enjoyed the read - especially those two lines. Appreciate. Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2013-05-30 05:49 PM

Lighthouse-

Indeed. Happy you enjoyed.

Cheers

Tomer

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-06-01 10:20 PM

Enjoyed...James

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

6 posted 2013-06-04 07:31 PM

James

Happy you liked it. Hope you're well.

Cheers

Tomer

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