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Bobby Beach |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Inside the woman I love Is an eight year old girl Afraid of our gray hair In that small child’s world She understands without words That the slowing ways I move Portend nothing good The various pills Taken at frequent intervals Doctors special and general Only assuage the passing of time Oh little angel I can see The fear in your eyes Dusk has come let us again Walk by the shore invisible And watch for guiding stars . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Poignantly beautiful, John. M |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
...and what lovely walks they must be.  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful, sensitive and well captured, my friend. j. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed the sensitive way you captured this fear John. Very nicely written. Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Our sweetest songs are those that tell the saddest thought.- Shelley. Ida |
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