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Open Poetry #48

Of A Hawaiian May

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-05-14 09:27 PM

Of A Hawaiian May

"As the trade winds
blow through her hair
I am thankful I am there."

I told her I would
buy her a new dress
and there it was
in the window
of Papaya's,
a halter top
medium length
size small,
a fine dress
to wear
to romp
to play,
a perfect fit for her
in the eighty plus
weather of a
Hawaiian May.

JamesLee
14May
2013

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2013-05-14 09:39 PM

Very, nice, my friend...you're definitely on a roll.

j.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2013-05-15 12:14 PM

Very nice!! You filled my senses and took me back to some of the best days of my life.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-05-15 07:41 AM

Great idea to buy that dress. Yes.

~*~ I'm reading a book about anti-gravity. I can't put it down. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2013-05-15 12:43 PM

A charming moment for sure, dear James.

Margherita

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2013-05-15 02:03 PM

(smiles) Given the weather in Hawaii year round, wouldn't that dress be considered a sort of staple? Just saying...

Loved the imagery of your poem. You took us right there.

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

6 posted 2013-05-15 07:42 PM

How nice to live in such luxury each day, too cold where I live, and too short the warm seasons

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2013-05-16 09:43 AM

very nice 'slice of life' write!

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