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EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2013-05-11 05:08 PM

Never greener
your attire

at this, the promised
hour

with the deluge
that wraps
upon your tender frame.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-05-11 05:19 PM

I can relate to "downpour," EmmaRose. It has been doing that here since last night, twice today and calling for more tonight. Liked you poem and the title caught my eye.

~*~ I stayed up all night to see where the sun went. Then it dawned on me. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2013-05-11 05:34 PM

I love your short but excellent style of writing, EmmaRose.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2013-05-12 05:49 AM

I love what you have seen and how you render it in words. Most beautiful, dear EmmaRose.

Margherita

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2013-05-12 10:00 AM

Beautiful EmmaRose. Much enjoyed the vision you painted here with your words.

Best wishes,
/Kit

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-05-12 07:07 PM

Nice...James

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2013-05-13 05:22 AM

I feel this with all my six senses, EmmaRose. Your poem is beautiful, sensitive, touching and excellent, as always.

Owl

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

7 posted 2013-05-14 03:05 PM

As I read your poem, in my eyes, the sycamore stood out so strong that the downpour went around and didn't even touch her. Anyways, thanks so much for sharing your vision with us. Enjoyed!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2013-05-14 09:54 PM

I love Sycamore's - have a 20 year old one outside my bedroom window, blocking the West sun in the evenings. I love everything about them, except raking the leaves in the fall...
yuk!!

Cool write, my friend.

j.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2013-05-16 12:23 PM

So very lovely. I'd love to see a Sycamore in or out of the rain.

Alison

Lady Goodman
Member

since 2012-10-04

Posts 193

10 posted 2013-05-16 06:23 AM

Lovely, lovely. With so few words, you manage a visual of a bride wearing green, caught in a downpour. (psst--it's okay, I know I'm weird.)

much enjoyed.

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

11 posted 2013-05-16 07:54 AM

Many thanks for the reads; always appreciated

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