Open Poetry #48 |
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Cassie |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
It seems that my tomorrows, ...are lost in yesterdays, Cassie wore a white lace dress, ...way back in second grade, Seeking absolution, ...no idea where it lays, Every night a eight o'clock, ...Cassie knelt and prayed, Atonement not forthcoming, ...I'm lost, know not the way, Cassie switched to skin tight jeans, ...by Chisholm Junior High, Within the wheat fields of my mind, ...I never learned to pray, Cassie moved by seventeen, ...she never said goodbye. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very thought provoking poem, Tim. Well thought out. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I, too, had my Cassie, only her name was Martha. Good write. ~*~ I'm reading a book about anti-gravity. I can't put it down. ~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I appreciated the glimpse into the past and the reminiscing of Cassie here Tim, much enjoyed. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I could feel your ache. Enjoyed! ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Reminds me of those who came and went in my life....and I wonder if they remember me like I remember them. This left me smiling through a tear. Memories are like that I guess. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Loved this! It reminds me of everyone in our family that grew up and went their own way. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Good piece, my friend. I think there are Cassies in us all. j. |
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