Words About a Profound Woman

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-05-14 03:00 PM

there are times she can be full of sass
with a twinkle in her eyes
a smile on her lips
can get down and dirty
but she has class
such a lovely woman
she comes fully equipped
to keep dark memories from back then
down and out of sight
a clandestine affair gives her peace of mind
she has beaten all the odds
and wears a crown
though personal grief with gloomy clouds entwine
she is profound
her words captures that
and she's a jewel in every sense
I love her
and I'm filled with joy
when she calls me Pat
as I turn my eyes toward her
she almost seems to purr
this woman gives my heart
something extra I know
and I like to think of me as her beau

©May 14, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ I'm reading a book about anti-gravity. I can't put it down. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2013-05-14 03:19 PM

Your love poems are great to read. Like your other poetry they pull you in and the feeling is tangible. I'm so happy for you that you have this love in your life. It seems to suit you.

lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-05-14 03:26 PM

Thanks Lori, for your happiness about my good fortune, I appreciate it and it does suit me.

~*~ I'm reading a book about anti-gravity. I can't put it down. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-14-2013 04:00 PM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2013-05-14 04:21 PM

This is very beautiful with its touch of youthful passion and freshness. Much enjoyed.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-05-14 04:26 PM

Ah, Margherita, you said the magic words, "touch of youthful passion," because yes, that is how she makes this old guy feel. Thank you for your kind comments.

~*~ I'm reading a book about anti-gravity. I can't put it down. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-05-14 09:08 PM

Wonderful...James

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2013-05-14 09:51 PM

Nothing quite like being smitten, and the feeling of knowing you still can be. Especially as the years take their toll.

Happy for you, my friend.

j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2013-05-14 10:21 PM

Thank you James . . . Jerry

~*~ I'm reading a book about anti-gravity. I can't put it down. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-15-2013 06:35 AM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2013-05-14 10:22 PM

Absolutely my friend J., absolutly.

~*~ I'm reading a book about anti-gravity. I can't put it down. ~*~

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

9 posted 2013-05-15 01:55 AM

nice words about a strong woman - gotta love that type.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2013-05-15 06:35 AM

Thinks majnu, strong women are the best, you bet.

~*~ I'm reading a book about anti-gravity. I can't put it down. ~*~

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

11 posted 2013-05-15 02:16 PM

Filled to the brim with happiness for you, my friend.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2013-05-15 02:22 PM

Thank you Bob, love strikes at all ages it seems.

~*~ I'm reading a book about anti-gravity. I can't put it down. ~*~

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