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Spring's first fallen
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Spring's first fallen |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest 
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You stayed back I ventured forward, in eurphoric uncertainty leaning towards the white rose of Sharon, my petals cast upon vagabond winds, I was shed of my lavendars the remnants tossed over parched over fields, but I never was far from you, the branches we etched upon erasing our born again blossoms, first of the Spring's release in a twilight rendition for its castaway embers. [This message has been edited by EmmaRose (05-08-2013 04:04 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This just took me places . . . quote: . . . within my thoughts of springs first fallen ~*~ I stayed up all night to see where the sun went. Then it dawned on me. ~*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Oh, I could sense the camouflaged epiphany of this one! Enjoyed!  |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
You made spring look even the more wonderful, simply enjoyed it.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
first of the Spring's release in a twilight rendition for its castaway embers. I deeply savored your amazing words, dear EmmaRose. Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I so enjoy reading you. Your poetry is lovely and so very fine tuned. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Your poetry is very lovely and I always enjoy it. I can't wait for the snow to melt and move into spring! Alison |
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