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Thoughts in Stained Glass |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Cool stuff!! enjoyed Kat >^..^< |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
STUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNING, Alison! Beeeeeeeg smiles. Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Took me a while to read this, but finally I got the message, and a good message it was. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
as is typical of you ... V. well done !! grand-fine 'poetic' and 'visual' impression. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
brilliant; extremely well thougt, such an enjoyment to read, yann |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
awesome thought, my friend, and love the overall effect of this. j. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you all. I was dabbling in Photoshop. I know it's hard to read, but it was hard to find a way to make the font visible. Then I decided I liked it a bit hard to read. I appreciate you peeking in, reading and letting me know your thoughts. xoxoxo A |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I like the clash of colors ... excellent poetry! Ms. E |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, Ms E |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You are so creative! Very nice write, Alison. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I liked this a lot, but I was expecting a haiku by the way it started. It would certainly be a lovely treatment of the thought and the art piece. Of course, almost every time I try an haiku, someone says it isn't one, so maybe this is one after all. It has the feel and the twist at the end. The only thing different, I guess, is the syllable count. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yes!Yes! Yes! Alison! Love it! lori |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you Lori, JL and VAS. xoxoxo Yes, VAS, this started out as a haiku, but then I went somewhere else with it. Alison |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
"Brilliant colors can mute the darker shadows when they are allowed to clash" i love this Ali, because like most good writing, it can go both ways.. sometimes hiding shadow with color is good.. and othertimes using color to not allow shadow to be revealed is not, so good this was bril my friend but then so are you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wishing you a clash that brings beams of brilliant light into your life. Hugs and love to you! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I love your play with color and shadow here Alison. I often forget that the clash can be welcome to help chase away the darkness. Much enjoyed both the visual and the words. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very impressive, Alison. Lovely colors. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
exceptional words, Alison, thanks a lot yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely done...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Boy, I sure didn't expect to see this poem at the top of the page again. It's really nice to see an older piece of work resurface. Thank you all for the comments and appreciation of my play. Alison |
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