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Consequences |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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Consequences 29 April 2013 You laughter-leap me under sun-flecked waterfalls; you sing my heart soft sunshine-warm; you cascade my words in gurgling laughter-streams, you race my blood, hot, wild and crazy and I melt into your electric arms. Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Diana, this is breath taking, you really point what love make us shivering, delightful images of what we can feel in these particular moments, have a nice day, yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for your lovely reply, Yann. You, too, have a nice day. Owl |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your poem is lovely and, perhaps, even more so without considering "Consequences." Maybe there's a way to make 'electric arms' a bit more user friendly. Maybe? Enjoyed!  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for enjoying my poem, Bob. Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice romantic writing...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
wonderful my friend . . . and Bob stole my words... electric made me stumble. j. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for enjoying my poem, Jimmy. Sorry, Jimmy and Bob, that you both stumbled on "electric", but that is how it is and I ain't gonna change it. Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, James. Owl |
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