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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2013-04-05 08:10 PM


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Oh forever beautiful
Slender young women

Still in your pale blue
Ribbon long white dresses
Stand yet there like graces come
Down to Earth to view the sea

On that now far away eternal
Summer hill keep raised
Your hands to unwrinkled brows
Let fictive breezes
Ruffle your shining hair

Clouds made for dreams
Drift above the silent bay
Waves now distant memories
Dance upon the shore

Oh forever beautiful
Slender young women
Bring out that smiling
Sun we once knew as well
Make it shine


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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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1 posted 2013-04-06 01:06 PM


Mystical; How you blend the metaphoric with the natural.  Enjoyed!  
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