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The Dream II
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The Dream II |
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Sue_s Junior Member
since 2013-03-26
Posts 45 |
The Dream II The day was uneventful the night called for a change The dark was calling to me all the shadows called my name I stepped into the darkness a slight chill spread over me The moon was just a sliver just ahead I could barely see The night chill reached out to me guiding me to parts unknown In the dark, I heard a whisper inside myself I heard a groan The voice was so familiar the smell...my friend of old As he licked my face, I trembled those blue eyes saw to my soul In the dark we hugged as friends do and he nuzzled me on the ear And he whispered oh so clearly that your scent was oh so near He smiled smugly ...as wolves tend to do and he asked just where you were Then he chuckled out quite loudly inside of me I felt a stir He spoke of the love inside of us he told of every path we crossed Told of all the roads we traveled through the ages..never lost As he spoke ..his blue eyes twinkled and somehow they lit the way And I felt a flush run through me as he softly had his say Then he did something peculiar maybe normal as wolves go He's my one and only wolf what is normal I wouldn't know He stood up upon his hind legs and he bowed and kissed my hand Then he asked me for one dance a wave of his paw..appeared a band Then the music slowly started it sent a chill right up my spine And he began to sing that song that special one..that's yours and mine I closed my eyes and felt the music I listened closely to every word As we danced I felt you here was in your arms...is that absurd On we danced while he was singing but I swear I felt your cheek In the air was your cologne my heart pounding.. my knees went weak Dare I open up my eyes all of this..what could it mean All at once...my eyes I opened my blue eyed wolf..had eyes of green It was just what I suspected guess I knew it all along Through your veins flows the same blood and your hearts sing the same song We are soul mates bound together not just two..oh no...us three We are destined to be together I know it's so....it's in my dreams. Sue 12/9/06 all rights reserved |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe you are inclined to be an author. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I loved this. A different take on a vampire poem. You are excellent with your rhyming pattern and the story within a story had me spellbound. ~*~ I tried to catch some fog. I mist. ~*~ |
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LorienLord Member
since 2013-02-03
Posts 55Wisconsin USA |
I love your dreams.....as I love you LL |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
quote: OK, now, how, it seems, the plot thicken as the love triangle moves towards a ménage à trois of enjoined lovers spirits of sorts. Enjoyed!  |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
O, I have to send this as a greeting card to someone. I'll have a sighted friend to help me do that ... Jaimequiet with Ginny |
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