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Open Poetry #48

Ice-Hot Flutters

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

0 posted 2013-04-05 07:32 AM

ICE- HOT FLUTTERS
14 March 2013

You fill my thoughts
and stretch my mind
and displace my galloping breath
and stop my heartbeat
on the turn, rodeo style,
and replace my concentration
with tumbled wild prairie emotions.

Owl

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2013-04-06 11:58 AM

quote:
(You) replace my concentration
with tumbled wild prairie emotions.

Whew!!! About now, I need a cool damp cloth! Enjoyed!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2013-04-06 01:53 PM

beautiful, diana, i guesse i know who inspired you, have a sweet day

yann

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2013-04-06 03:55 PM

Thank you, Bob. I don’t have a Smiley of a cool damp cloth, so I hope you found one, lol!

Thank you, Yann, for enjoying my poem and the kind wishes. Maybe . . . maybe not . . . enigmatic smile.

Owl

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2013-04-07 03:54 AM

Strong emotions create lovely poetry, Diana.
Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2013-04-07 09:32 AM

Thank you, Ida. Smiles.

Owl

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