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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2013-03-20 02:38 PM


           Zen of Spring

Though a cold-relentless wind
still stirs these bitter woods
on this dark side of twilight,
beneath a frosty moon
and infinite starry void,
the mind becomes the
  Spring sunrise
clean, pure, and bright
with all the new promise
and hopes of dawn.

              --- b. e. adams (3/20/13)

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (03-21-2013 10:28 AM).]

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-03-20 02:51 PM


Spring is springing all around me down here in the swamp, Bruce. The first day of spring is deliciously wonderful. So keep thinking spring-like thoughts, it won't be long for you up there in those mountains.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2013-03-20 07:38 PM


I've heard of having a spring in one's step, but having a spring in one's mind seems to manifest a much better rendition for me.  Thanks.  
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2013-03-21 06:40 AM


still waiting here for that freshness of Spring~~sighing~~

M

katahdin
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4 posted 2013-03-21 08:48 PM


Last day of winter here in Maine with snow all but gone. Just a few piles on the edge of the lawn. Then comes the first day of spring and we get hit with a Nor'easter- 16 inches of snow! Still waiting and dreaming of spring.
Enjoyed your poem!
Kat >^..^<

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2013-03-22 09:02 AM


This Winter has seemed a rather long one ... throughout the N.E. at least ...
not so much snow where I am; however a very many really 'bitter-cold' days ...

Many thanks to each of you fine poets for commenting on my ever-so-humble lil' 'scribblings!'

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