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nordine New Member
since 2013-03-12
Posts 5 |
THE I-PHONE RINGING SHE ANSWERS THROWING A WIPE ON THE GRASS THE GRASS USED TO GROW USED TO BE GREEN AND STILL WEEPING DEW SINGING A FOREVER "ADIEU!" HE PUT A LAPTOP ON THE KNEE AND CONNECT TO FACEBOOK A COLD COFFEE NOTHING TO COOK SMOKING A "CASA" BLACK TOBACCO A CHILD PLAYING WITH MUD A FLY LANDS ON HIS PALE FACE CARELESSLY DIGGING A HOLE TO BURY HIS DYING DREAMS THE GRASS USED TO GROW USED TO BE GREEN AND STILL WEEPING DEW SINGING A FOREVER "ADIEU" |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I like the simple, Haiku like texture of your poem. Very nice. |
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