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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Naked Except for my shirt Which she put on Before getting up To look out the window She stands there Watching birds Fly across The morning sky And I don’t care That she has nothing to say I haven’t heard before Not young Not youthfully slender This moment for memory If any This right now All that matters This morning in golden light This woman indifferent To my dying . |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nicely done....even the shock effect ending. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
You capture a moment, the tense and tender moment very well. Enjoyed. |
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