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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

0 posted 2013-03-15 06:06 PM

Pyro

When moonlight glistens off
icicle spears
dripping from our outer universes,
tickle me pink
in your radiance
and roll me over another log
that your amorous flame might fuel
my affections.

Though angels clash in hades
and demoniacs retort with moans
that spark
as do smolderings in your timbers
pop,
ravish me in your twilight's flurry,
silence me in your amber glow,
seduce me in your ember.

Pull me deeper,
deeper to your Delilah dance,
oh, temptress fire,
crackling laughter,
Legion's hiss.

[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (03-15-2013 07:21 PM).]

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2013-03-15 06:38 PM

I enjoyed reading Bob...lots of smoldering going on and liked the Delilah dance line too...very inventive.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2013-03-15 07:29 PM

Thanks Victoria...

Not that I have long hair or anything, but, um, I'm really happy that particular line stood out for you.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2013-03-15 07:45 PM

The poem is to my liking, Lighthousebob, I admire the play on words you have presented here. Especially did I like

quote:
Though angels clash in hades
and demoniacs retort with moans

. . . but throughout your poem you give the reader something to marvel and wonder about. And yes, like Victoria, I was pulled toward Delilah's dance.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

4 posted 2013-03-16 11:10 AM

Thanks Jerry...

Of course you were. Of course you were as was I drawn to the dance being of the same male perversion (persuasion). Please, be assured that "the play on words" is one of mutual admiration, my friend, but, um, I'm not so certain that mine is based on perception as much as it is on lack of prescription.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2013-03-18 11:55 PM

Wow....what a vision!!!!

So very beautiful and serene...

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

6 posted 2013-03-19 12:42 PM

Why, thanks, BluesSerenade (Lori)...

so very, very much!!! I really do appreciate your kind reply. Thank you!!!

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