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Open Poetry #48

Dream Girl

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

0 posted 2013-03-15 11:41 PM

You called me a vixen
A tempest
A beautiful lie
With my red, lips full
And my skinny heels, high
All glitter,
And glossy shine

But once you thought me stunning
My confidence
My fiery vibe
With warm and sultry skin
And a smoothy, gliding stride
All promise,
And pleasured heights

I was a challenge
A talisman
A slow walk on the wild side
With my unwavering vision
Full of strength and fight
All freedom,
And passionate life

You wanted me to revive you
To move you
And make you fly
To fuel your desire
And make you come alive
All arousal,
And tumultuous skies

How disappointed you must have been
To discover
To find
That it was more dream than woman
All illusions
And distant phantom lights

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by MorningStar (03-16-2013 12:24 AM).]

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2013-03-16 12:10 PM

Loved this, especially (all actually) the last couple of lines ... very well ended!

j.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-03-16 07:31 AM

Unfortunately we many times allow our uninsightful dreams to cloud our thinking with glitter and fanfare, when in reality we are seeing only a human with all the flaws each of us have.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

3 posted 2013-03-17 12:34 PM

Thank you both!

"I'll tell you how the sun rose
A ribbon at a time..." - Emily Dickinson

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