Open Poetry #48 |
Sunny Day |
Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Sunny Day Could da been dat storm just a passin' by, Could da been dat paint I forgot to buy, Could da been dat dog tryin' to get out, Could da been dat wind. Dis I have no doubt, Could da been dat thief tryin' to get in, Could da been dat time just a growin' thin, Could da been dat man. Could da been dat ghost, Could da been dat rot eatin' at da post, Could da been dat mite. Hungry little pest, Could da been dat neighbor. It was dem. I guess, Could da been dat foe. Could da been dat friend, Could da been most anythin', but da fence won't mend. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! It matters not who the culprit was if the damn fence won't mend. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Thanks Jerry... but, um, I'm really not frettin' dat broken fence much cuz it's a sunny day! I'll get to it someday. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Cute one Bob...gave me a little chuckle. ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Thanks Victoria... Reminds ya of someone ... Maybe? |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
What a fun romp with words Bob! Mendin' fences ain't somthin' ya gotta rush on lest yer worrin' 'bout cows gettin' out. Lori |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Thanks Lori... Naw, aint got no cows! Aint got no sheep! Aint got no worries... but to get more sleep! I really enjoyed your reply. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very clever, Bob. ida |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Thanks Ida... I hope that's a clever as a fox clever. I hope! |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
A pity that fences can't mend themselves... Especially on sunny days!!! Charming "I'll tell you how the sun rose |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Thanks Morning Star (Aenea)... I couldn't agree more, especially on a sunny day, but here's to my hoping for the past few years. |
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