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EmmaRose
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0 posted 2013-03-11 07:58 PM



Over the fields of clover
the children dream
the gifts of harvest

the sun brings forth
the rain's great promise

the birds proclaim
the newborn's moment

as the seed presents
as our new pink flower

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2013-03-11 08:00 PM


quote:
as the seed presents
as our new pink flower

. . . and that is what it is all about . . . new birth . . . Nice work . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2013-03-11 09:59 PM


Congratulations, EmmaRose. Lovely poem too.
                               Ida

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2013-03-14 09:45 PM


Wonderful...James
jwesley
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4 posted 2013-03-14 11:29 PM


I've some planted and hope they . . .
I've one roasting, they hope a daughter, and hope the child . . .

. . . flowers into something as beautiful as this piece...

j.

Victoria
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5 posted 2013-03-15 09:06 AM


Congratulations Emma...sweet news indeed.

Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2013-03-15 11:04 AM


Yeppers ... us too, I mean my daughter's due in October. Her first. Lovely poem.
BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2013-03-16 10:03 AM


Oh happy day!  Love this little flower in bloom.

Big hugs and congrats to you and your wee one, EmmaRose.

EmmaRose
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Midwest
8 posted 2013-03-17 06:02 PM


Many thank yous to all for your sweet comments

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