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Vieux Carré Dolly
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Vieux Carré Dolly |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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Vieux Carré Dolly Eyes black as midnight Searching for a score Creole beauty Heart carved from ice A come-on smile (Un)lucky trick Drunkenly Follows Vieux Carré Dolly Into the darkness Of an alley Knees to the ground Taking care of business Jolts of lust Taste on her tongue As the razor in her hand Slices tricks' back pocket Billfold in hand Vieux Carré Dolly Quickly leaves the hick Thinking of his good deal What he got He got for free ©March 3, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-15-2013 09:52 AM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Jerry! This is just Awful - - - ly funny !! Love it! (though not sure if it'll last on the Open Forum...) j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Maybe not, J. Thanks for stopping by. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Your poem about the Quarter and mine was as different as day and night...haha...I liked reading about Billy Joe ha... ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I know, Victoria. I get a bit crude at times. Thank you for stopping by. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Yeah, yeah, I can relate ... I mean, um, to having nothing in the wallet.  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh I hear you, Lighthousebob. Thank you for being here. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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