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Open Poetry #48

Strangler

ponderthepoetorrsx
Member

since 2011-06-25

Posts 284
U.S , Ca

0 posted 2013-03-11 03:27 PM

How could you be so cruel?
Exhausted,
Now so shocked
Out of pain and spirit
It would have been far better
had you killed me on sight,
Instead you chose to lurk in the fog
Selfish reasons, elf esteem,
But i say without feeling,
Because inside I can only forgive you,
Fatefully loving you til the end

yolilitzli (a word meaning life, my names richard by the way)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2013-03-11 07:09 PM

quote:
Because inside I can only forgive you,
Fatefully loving you til the end

That's a great conclusion to your words so drenched with pain.

Well done.

Margherita

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