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kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
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0 posted 2013-03-11 05:43 PM



I hate waking up so I just don't sleep
I hate throwing up so I just won't eat
I hate falling over so I stay on the ground
I hate convocation so I don't want to be found

I hate being me so I'm not myself
I hate being poor so I hoard my wealth
I hate being wrong so I'm always right
I hate the day so I come out at night

I hate that I hate so try to love
I hate being cursed so I pray to above
I hate the world so I block the world out
I hate crowded rooms so I send myself out

I hate this is true so I deny every bit
I hate my bad health so I try to get fit
I hate my descent so I lift my self up
I hate my past so now the books shut

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
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1 posted 2013-03-11 06:46 PM


quote:
I hate that I hate so try to love


... and that's the best idea I think, dear Andrew. Your poem is very cute.

Nice to see you back here on the blue pages.

Margherita

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