Open Poetry #48 |
Distilled Embrace |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Distilled Embrace Tumbling from my lips, that warmer ways conspire Aligned in noted quizzical and confident desire Enigma be my music as these memories prevail To render to this space and page envisions sweetly trail The years have passed in silence, since last I touched your heart And ceased, the gentle call of wild; and ceased my steadfast part At times though half-light lingers, in squint revives the dream That silently remembered, a wish sent forth redeem Three stanzas sign my heartfelt hopes, sent forth upon the wind To reach the destined points of all return in moonlight blend Then tumbling from my lips, beseeched and closer still The most and all that should be said, and held against my will Copyright Kkh 3/10/13 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh my, dear Kathleen, what a wonderful poem you have created! So perfect in its rhythm and rhymes and so heavenly in its content. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah . . . quote: This, then is the essence of this beautiful and well-written poem. And those wishes sent forth to redeem with find its place front and center. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you both for your kind words. TD |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Three stanzas sign my heartfelt hopes, sent forth upon the wind To reach the destined points of all return in moonlight blend Then tumbling from my lips, beseeched and closer still The most and all that should be said, and held against my will quite beautiful words indeed, thanks for the enticing work of poetry, have a nice day yann |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
So nice to read you again TD...beautifully penned as always. You have a unique way of expressing your thoughts. Enjoyed... ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I appreciate your comments and your inspiring poetry here. |
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