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loudsilence
New Member

since 2013-03-12

Posts 6
Atlanta, Georgia, USA

0 posted 2013-03-12 04:25 AM

Late in the night when you fear the unknown
Does he warm up your mind? As you chill to the bone
I do love you, I do feel you, Each day and night
But I can't tell right from wrong, or fear from insight
But you always knew everything and that is what is clear
Do you love him? Do you love him? Do you love him, my dear?

You're not a girl, you're a town
You're snow on the ground
You're my first year in school
And all around my memories, you dance
You're not a girl, you're a waltz
You're a canopy bed
You're June to August
You're the back and forth sway of the hammock all day
When I asked you what did you say?

Now if I'm walkin' through the rain
And I hear you call my name
I will break into a run without a pause
And if your love laughs at your dreams
Well it's not as bad as it seems
Either way one of them has got to go
And if you take of my soul
You can still leave it whole
With the pieces of you own you leave behind

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2013-03-12 04:44 AM

I certainly enjoyed it of course! Well done Jesse!

Kate

loudsilence
New Member

since 2013-03-12

Posts 6
Atlanta, Georgia, USA

2 posted 2013-03-12 04:49 AM

Thank you, Kate! That makes me glad

I've been looking through yours, sorry I forgot to leave comments! Which poems of yours would you suggest I read first?

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2013-03-12 04:51 AM

Whatever ones you'd like I have a whole library of them I'm sure you noticed!

Kate

loudsilence
New Member

since 2013-03-12

Posts 6
Atlanta, Georgia, USA

4 posted 2013-03-12 04:55 AM

Yes you productivity is amazing! I don't write often, only when I'm moved to.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2013-03-12 10:19 PM

Wonderful flow of words...James

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2013-03-12 10:40 PM

Loudsilence,

Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a very special message!

Sunshine

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

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