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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-03-10 12:40 PM

Raw
exposed
au naturel
Frequently fingered
smooth
with remembering oils
Distinct grains
enhanced in timeless
nevermore

LGR(C) 3/10/13

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-03-10 12:46 PM

quote:
Distinct grains
enhanced in timeless
nevermore

Buffed to a splendorous shine . . . Liked this one Lori, good to see you again.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2013-03-10 07:13 PM

Very enticing in its essentiality, dear Lory.

Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2013-03-12 02:27 AM

Very nice...James

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2013-03-12 12:14 PM

Thank you so much Jerry I always appreciate hearing from you.

lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2013-03-12 12:17 PM

Margherita
I always look forward to your percptive comentary. It is good to hear from you thanks for reading this piece.
lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2013-03-12 12:18 PM

Hey James! Thanks for the read!
lori

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2013-03-15 05:30 AM

Excellent!
Ida

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

8 posted 2013-03-15 11:57 AM

I do appreciate your attention to detail... but, um, "Nevermore" seems so sad ... I just watched the Lorax, sooooo, I'm feeling a bit over sensitive right now...

Enjoyed!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2013-03-15 01:21 PM

Thanks Ida! Your praise means a lot to me.

lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

10 posted 2013-03-15 01:24 PM

Well Bob...sometimes things left unfinished are sad...
But! I am very happy you took the time to read my poem. Thank you!

lori

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