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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2013-03-04 09:44 PM


Parts of the Equasion

If she was to
call me baby
that would indicate
a change in her heart
towards me;
words of endearment
can broadcast
the softening of a heart,
not necessarily love,
a gently flowing
stream of affection
follows an awakening
of the feelings,
and when feelings
are brought to life
a silky flow of thoughts,
words and actions can
become an important
part of the equasion.

JamesLee
04March
2013

  

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Victoria
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1 posted 2013-03-04 09:48 PM


Yes...Darling and sweetheart are always nice...enjoyed James as always.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

2islander2
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2 posted 2013-03-05 12:35 PM


love or affection, there can be an alternative, the quation is well written, it could be solved, thanks a lot for the exquisite reading,


yann


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2013-03-06 11:02 PM


Thank you Victoria and 2islander2 for the nice responses...James
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