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Open Poetry #48

The One

LorienLord
Member

since 2013-02-03

Posts 55
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2013-02-27 06:24 PM

Let me be he,
the One who sees
you shimmer in the desert
heat dissipating
distorting the light
as only you can.

Let me be he,
the One who carries
you each time over
your threshhold
as I speak in tongues
only you can hear.

Let me be he,
the One who covers
your nakedness
with mine
then let me wear you
inside and out.

Let me be he
the One who has written
the story where
your beginning
is now my
happy ending.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-02-27 06:36 PM

Good writing, LorienLord. There is nothing the reader has to guess at to understand your meaning and intentions within the framework of this explicit poetry. I like that. Too much thinking gives me a headache. Heh.Heh

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2013-02-27 07:42 PM

awesome

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2013-02-27 08:59 PM

Sensual and seductive and oh so very passionate.

Great writing, Love this!!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2013-03-12 02:25 AM

Nice...James

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