Open Poetry #48 |
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The gypsy cat (request by VAS) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa ![]() |
The gypsy cat cuddled up next to a wagon wheel and sought the dream eternal love bearing down upon the plains. The sun rose up and higher up, stole the cat’s dream state, and pushed her startled and alone into the crying fields. She listened well to heart-sore songs and felt the pain of deep despair but what to do, where to go, when trees by man cut down and left to wither on the ground? She ran, she ran, that gypsy cat making circles in the sand because even fear could not dispel her need to be forever near the one who fed her love. But in the night she stalked evil; judgment on the prowl and grew in stature so to be greater than imaginings. Tread carefully lest you wake that gypsy cat asleep! Helen / 26 February 2013 |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Cute one Helen...so nice of you to write the poem for Virginia...Im sure she will love it ![]() ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ah, yes, a gypsy nature, yet still a cat, most certainly. There seems to be an underlying commentary, as well. The way of the world threatening the gypsy nature. I think I must try one...but, we'll see. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Well, I never thought I'd ever write a story about a cat but I suppose whatever I write about they'll still think as I do. I'm working hard on trying to think another way but still a long way to go. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I guess when inconsideration removes one from their comfort zone, then two, should watch his / her rear-view mirror ... Interesting read ... In this instance anyone can become either the one or the two, while reading ![]() Rex ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, what have I discovered here, dear Helen! It's certainly deserving of another round to be read. Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Hi Margherita. What a surprise to see this pop up again. Thank you. Hugs Helen |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed pondering this piece Honeybunch, an interesting tale you have woven here! Nicely done. ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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