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Open Poetry #48

Truth's Irony

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

0 posted 2013-04-07 08:57 AM

beliefs in darkness

whipped into crystalline lies

dreams melt in daylight

©2013 by icebox

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2013-04-07 12:53 PM

Wow! This one is pure poetry, Icebox. I can feel the violation that daylight has brung with it. Excellent writing.

Michael

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2013-04-09 01:23 PM

For me, the word 'melt' or, um, to experience a slow death is what's most alarming. Enjoyed!

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2013-04-20 04:28 PM

It just takes a few words, Mr. Ice.
Ida

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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California U.S.A

4 posted 2013-04-23 12:15 PM

Truth would be revealed
if eyes where opened
to what and who
is the real boogie man.
Cool poem!
E

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

5 posted 2013-04-23 12:56 PM

and recrystallize in the night

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

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Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2013-04-23 03:27 AM

My interpretation of this, is that the dreams were scary and dark, and that daylight brought light and warmth to dispell the horror of the dreams . . .

Beautiful anyway, no matter the interpretation.

Owl

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2013-05-04 08:33 PM

Very fine writing...James

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

8 posted 2013-05-12 10:55 AM

Thank you all.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

9 posted 2013-05-12 11:48 AM

Truth blooms in the night

eyes hide from sunlit survey

dreams love perfection

I felt inspired by your mysterious poetic exploit, dear Charly.

Margherita

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

10 posted 2013-05-13 12:29 PM

Margherita, well done!

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