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2islander2
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0 posted 2013-02-16 01:42 AM



Behind the garret,
she knows birds,
and the barrier which moans,

Under a blazing sun,
she charms stars,
word of the brook,
with a stony patience.

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OwlSA
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1 posted 2013-02-16 02:31 AM


Beautiful, Yann, very beautiful.

Owl

Victoria
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2 posted 2013-02-16 08:52 AM


I love watching birds and listening to the woodpecker every morning even though he does wake me ha... I think birds know us too.They comfort us just like the squirrels. Enjoyed yann.

~Victoria

jwesley
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3 posted 2013-02-16 09:57 AM


By now you know I love my morning coffee, and often drink it watching the birds on or around my feeder:
robins, gracklins, 3 species of sparrow, Cardinals, Mocking birds, 3 species of woodpecker, Bluejays, and others;  and many more as the migrating birds come through. And your piece just makes that enjoyment last a little longer. And the crick-in-the-neck squirrels which I wish would like mosquitoes, just go away.  Although I do have them kept off my feeder now.

Enjoyed, my friend.

j.


Margherita
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4 posted 2013-03-08 12:42 PM


Intriguing, dear Yann!

Margherita

2islander2
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5 posted 2013-03-08 12:44 PM


thanks diana, for reading and commenting
yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2013-03-08 12:47 PM


thanks a lot, victoria for sharing, i do agree, that birds and quirrels have a sweet impact on people, specially when tormented and irritated, thanks for the sweet comment,


yann

2islander2
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7 posted 2013-03-08 12:49 PM


thanks jwesley for the exquisite comment, you have good company, and i would like to share a coffee there ,

have a nice day


yann

2islander2
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8 posted 2013-03-08 12:50 PM


thanks marherita, the original poem is french and inspired by the wruter, : jean giono, thanks for rading and commenting


yann

Marchmadness
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9 posted 2013-03-12 12:46 PM


Something magickal here, yann.
                        Ida

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