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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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It is the call of the sea, the endless call that beckon, those mysterious whispers seducing the stars to bathe within the frothy crest of the waves. It is the dawn as the sun rises sipping the dew from the brim of morn, blooming like cherry blossoms in the springtime. It is the zephyrean lullaby of the sunset drifting like burnt orange seaweed upon the ocean disappearing beyond the horizon, as orange meringue smolders into the embers of the past; into the purple twilight hour. It is the first glimpse of the moon that entices the night to dance with the shadows into the unknown; as petals of the white lotus flower bathe in ripples of moonlight. It is ...Phenomenal... ~Victoria~ I was adored once too. William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by Victoria (03-06-2013 07:25 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It is . . . YOU! This poem is a pure delight, Victoria. I was hung up into making metaphors with each stanza, and there were some interesting ones for sure. This is a damn fine piece of work. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Dear Jerry, I'm so glad you enjoyed...I always appreciate your nice responses.  ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a superb moment of poetry and reality of nature can enlight our sou, if we pay attention, thanks for the enjoyable read, yann |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much...I love writing of love and nature...always nice to hear from you Yann. ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
It sure is......... thanks for the reminders |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Emma...nice to hear from you today...appreciate your comments. ~Victoria |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The Sea is all that for sure! I love your choice of words and your pretty painted visuals. This is a real beauty, V~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Lori...missed you around here. Nice to hear from you tonight. ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It is fine writing...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much James for your supportive comments. ~Victoria |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is simply exquisite, dear Victoria! Brava! I love every line! Margherita |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I am so happy you enjoyed my words Margherita... and that means alot coming from you. ~Victoria |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Victoria you painted a masterpiece with this one. Makes me long for a vacation at the shore. lori:0) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you very much for your kind comments Lori. ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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