Sweetness ( View of a young man in love)

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Open Poetry #48

Sweetness ( View of a young man in love)

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2013-02-15 03:39 PM

Upon the tree you laid,
where the sun kissed your golden
skin. The breeze caressed you,
leading your sweet scent afar
to my attention. Rained on with
warm water from clouds out of
the African Savanna. You
tease me
as my soul adore your
beauty inside and out.
I reach for you,
as you let go of
your throne. I breath
in your fragrances, taking
in the moment. My hunger at it's
peek, my mouth lingers upon
your flesh in sweet
bliss.
Eating you away, alas you are
mine. You
are mine, body and
soul.

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2013-02-15 04:12 PM

Oh yes young love...young love makes the world go around...nice to be reading your words again ken. I havent read you in a while. Welcome back.

Enjoyed.

~Victoria

Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes.
Confucius

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

2 posted 2013-02-19 02:41 PM

Thanks for your comment. I've been busy alot these past months.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2013-03-04 09:39 PM

Nice romantic writing...James

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

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By the Seaside

4 posted 2013-03-06 08:55 PM

Could hear and feel the pitter pattering.

Nice writing, Ken~

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

5 posted 2013-03-08 03:38 PM

James- thanks for reading and commenting.

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

6 posted 2013-03-08 03:39 PM

Blues Serenade- Glad you enjoyed the poem and thanks for the comment.

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