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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Alone Beyond a pallid winter sunset, past the mystic twilight of that uncertain hour, empty, traceless shadows walk these midnight streets of discontent and broken promises beneath a cold-indifferent moon, scattering memories with the ashes of burnt roses, and chanting that saddest refrain of all who have ever loved ... and walked alone. --- b. e. adams (2/15/2013) |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
beautiful words to depict the sad. Enjoyed jo |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Taking the trauma of love lost and giving it a location applicable -- quote: Perfect in every way, Bruce . . . ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
It is a perfect poem, Bruce. Being alone myself I can certainly relate but, you know, it's just one of those little things in life that will pass sooner than we think. Enjoyed! Helen |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is sad and beautiful, it makes thinks of sense and deep, superb, yann |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, You write "lonely" with so much yearning. I love how you weave nature with your emotions. This piece is beautiful. Alison |
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LorienLord Member
since 2013-02-03
Posts 55Wisconsin USA |
A very beautiful but sad poem......I think we have been there at one time or another. |
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